Critique

Today Friday 23rd April, I had a critique with Jo and Sarah which went very well.

I had shown them both my progress with my magazine spread (which has been a lot since the last time I had a tutorial) and they seemed really impressed with what I have done. I was told to change some of the floral patterns I had added on my ethical fashion page, and I agree, they don't feel edgy enough and do not work well with the rest of the magazine and with the rest of the pages. I was also advised to try and make all of my images fit the A4 pages rather than having gaps. So all in all not too much that needs to be done, and they really like the work I have been doing so I am extremely happy! I am going to aim to get this magazine spread finished by next week and sort out printing so that I know its done and will leave time for any problems or troubles that may occur. Once this has been done I can concentrate on organising my research file and blog, annotating and adding any other information I may need before the final deadline.